Today's writing class

Today's writing class was good for me. First I printed out three sheets of Essays about one of my favorite movies! And I exchanged my two sheets of essays with Sanae and Hiromi. We checked each other's essays. I found same answer, but I didn't know well that it was really good answer for them. Finally I retuned essays my partners. I coudn't find good phrase when I checked my essay, but they told me good answer. It was a great help for me. Checking other people's essays were very interesting for me, for I can read their essay's stories and writing. I thought that I want to improve my revel of writing from now. (115・1203words)week4 (2182words)all