Essays revision

　It's nice to meet you. My name is Noriko uozumi. I'm a sophomore at KGU. I'm living in Kumamoto. Kumamoto is famous for Aso, which has the biggest caldera and we can drink pure water and there are many hot sprongs. It makes me relax and I love Kumamoto's nature. My hobby is watching movies. Especially I like adventure movies. And I like 007 movies. How about you?
　My department is English. But I am also studying Chinese and learning to be a teacher of Japanese at KGU. Someday I want to go abroad and make friends with people from many countries. So my dream is to be a flight attendant and become cosmopolitan. What is your dream?
I'm working part-time as a clerk in a crepe shop. Before I started work there,making crepes looked difficult, but it was simple. So if you want to eat crepes, I will make them. And I can make Chinese food,sushi,hot pot cooked at the table, sukiyaki etc. When I stay at your home,I will make you Japanese food. And please tell me about American food.
When I was eleven years old, I went to Hawaii. There was a beautiful sea and it was warm in the summer. It was comfortable for me. But Kumamoto's summer is humid. And winter is freezing,because Kumamoto's location is around basin. How about your hometown? (226words)Week5 (3727words)all